Charlotte curnick
About how creativity can positively impact quality of life for the elderly
- Academic tone of voice
- Some quotes are too long but well developed on in following paragraph
- Little to no waffle clear scentences and good explanation of all points and there is a clear topic focus for the dissertation as a whole
- Writes about a sensitive subject with tact and clarity
- Good quality of research wide range sources and lots of books as well as questionnaires and email research showing a diverse range of information and sourcing of information
- Some writing is a little clumsy and doesn't read smoothly
- In the main body of the essay she triangulates sources and individual points to argue the need for creative sessions for the elderly
- Conclusion reads slightly like another triangulative point and the final paragraph does not mention creative activity in relation to ageing, overall though the dissertation is directed and fairly conscise
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