- interesting research
- structurally needs work
- triangulation = large quotes this needs paraphrasing
- still dealing with too many historical perspectives
- argument isn't up too date
- make comparisons, don't just analyse, compare to modern
- Hirst = good theme should be used throughout
- how purposeful is the David analysis
- think about your images the other 2 are a bit 'iffy'
what to do next after a discussion with Pete:
- rejig quotes and some content in first essay
- find a modern example of Mr and Mr's Andrews to compare with in second essay two comparison images can count as one image analysis
- do the same with Michelangelo (angel of the north?) or pick this instead of Michelangelo
shorten quotes modernise arguments
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